Planning .
- Spotlight
- Dark
- Scary
- Brothers
- Friends
- Late night
- Silent
Spotlight
Come on come on ! I my brothers and their friends were playing outside . They asked me if we should play spotlight . I said sure . My brother Kahutea was in for spotlight . It started getting darker so I got the torch for him . We were waiting for him to count up to 50 seconds . I was with my brother Mahu , we hid in the dark silent bush where no one could find us . 5 , 4 , 3 , 2, , 1 , “ Here I come ” yelled Kahutea. He ran around like a crazy horse trying to find someone . “ Ha I found you Bow ” said Kahutea. They had to go find the rest of us.
As my brother and I ran into the backyard , we heard someone breathing heavily behind us so we turned around and “ BOO” said Bow .“ Ahhhh” I screamed , found you Waipiata as Bow tags Mahu I . We just had to find Tumoana and then we’d finished playing spotlight . So we split up and went to go and find him . I and Kahutea went to go look for him at the backyard , while Mahu and Bow looked at the front yard . Kahutea heard a bang against the fence so we ran there and it was Bow and Mahu who crashed into the fence while trying to give us a fright .
It started to get really late and mum called us to come inside . But my brother said to mum 5 more minutes please , so mum said sure 5 more minutes then . I caught something at the corner of my eye , someone sprinted into the backyard . It was Tumoana , quickly let’s find him . Kahutea and I ran quickly and quietly to the back and tried to look for him . Mum called us to come inside , and as soon as we were walking there we saw Tumoana at the doorstep . We tagged him and we said “ you're going to be in the next round when we play spotlight” .
Is that i did 3 paragraphs . 
That I had conference with Mrs Smith 
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